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In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?
Goodwin analysed music videos and came up with key points as to what distinguishes music as a form. One of these points were that : "There is a relationship between lyrics and visuals". I encorporated this when making my music video making strong links between my lyrics and visuals. For example, when the lyrics ask: "If you've got leave then why can't I come along too?" the artist is shown on screen typing those words into a Facebook comment at the same time.
Music videos in modern society are used as an advertising medium for new music tracks released by artists. They’re used primarily to sell the image of the artist to the consumer rather than the actual music track itself. My music track I chose fell into the genre of popular music and so therefore I researched into the conventions of popular music videos. I found that popular music videos typically involved the artist/s lip syncing to the track whilst performing and/or portraying narrative elements of the song eluded in the lyrics. The edits were typically straight cut, fast edits in order to portray a sense of continuity and naturalism. In order to sell the image of the artist effectively a lot of close ups were usually used of the artist in order to show off their image to the consumer. The artist would be dressed in a way that would appeal and best sell their image to the target audience.
Typically in a music video involving a female artist they are either dressed or act provocatively in order to sell their image in the music video. It will appeal to the sexual side of men and women will idolise them as someone they want to look like. Therefore, they sell the image, and the music, to a mass audience. However, in my video as the artist is young and her target audience would be younger, teenage girls rather than the mass I choose to dress her in the video with a “girl next door” look. She is dressed down in just jeans and a plain white top. However, her hair is up and she is wearing makeup which still allows her to be seen as beautiful and someone girls will idolise.
The fact she still wears makeup will still allow her sexual side to appeal to the male audience and in my ancillary texts she is dressed slightly more provocatively to ensure the mass audience appeal is not cut completely.
My music video involves the artist miming to the track and she also acts out the situation in the lyrics therefore providing the video with the stereotypical half performance half narrative structure that is typical of popular music videos. When editing the video I chose to use straight cuts to aid with continuity and keep the video looking naturalistic. However, when the artist is sat under a tree waiting I used a dissolve between shots to show the passing of time otherwise the shots would have been too static.
How effective is the combination of your main product and ancillary texts?
To accompany my music video I constructed two ancillary texts: a website homepage and a Digipak for an album release. My website was based around aiming at a younger, teenage audience and the colours and texts I used reflect this. Pink, baby blue and white are the main colours used and these are colours typically associated with younger, teenage girls. My Digipak played on the idea of associating the artist with nature and the colour white to portray her as pure an innocent whilst still incorporating the same font and style of images as the website so that the two could be clearly linked by a consumer.
Following on from my website I created the digipak for an album release. The font is consistent from the website and the artist is wearing the same outfit. Therefore, the consumer can make connections between the two media texts and easily recognise it as the same artist. After researching into album covers in the research task I knew when making my digipak that the use of images of the artist was particularly important. All the mainstream, pop artist, female album covers I had analysed consistently used close up images of the artist and images that made the consumer feel involved e.g. the artist looking at the camera. Therefore I used an image of my artist on every panel except one in order to sell the image of the star.
In terms of matching my main product my ancillary texts match in artist only. In the video she wears a different costume to match the mood and genre of the song. However, I feel this is not relevant as the consumer would be able to recognise the artist and it is more important that the website and digipak match up as these are the static texts that would not be replaced regularly: artists make new music videos with different looks all the time for new singles.
In order to evaluate my work effectively I needed to gain an outside party view. As a class we showcased our videos and then e-mailed each other feedback, at least one positive and one improvement. In order to get feedback on my ancillary texts I had both up on the screen for the class to view, they then fed back and I wrote in Microsoft Word what they commented on.
My website received a positive response about how its layout and colour scheme made the page easy to use and suited the target audience well. I purposely made the layout uncluttered and easy to use as these are the main things that if not done well put people off using a website and returning. Therefore, in order to create a successful page that not only sold the artist but also products it had to be easy to navigate around and use pages. For my colour scheme I picked pink, white and baby blue because these are stereotypically “girly” colours and would play on bringing out the “girly” side of the artist. I could have picked darker colours and played on the mysterious and sexual side of the artist. However, I felt this would appeal more to the sexual audience of males which was not my target audience and also that this colour scheme would not match the ballad style of the song I had chosen. My feedback for improvements for my website homepage included using more images. I agree and if I were to improve the website further I would put more content in the middle frame, most probably including a montage/slide show of pictures. The improvements also included linking up the social networking links on the right hand side which I also agree with and were the website to be real and live these links would be linked to Jodie Jones’ real social networking pages. Furthermore, I had one comment on the approximate inch of white space at the bottom of my main webpage framing. This was unintentional and not noticeable in Adobe Dreamweaver when editing. However, it was suggested that I filled such a gap with a copyright claim and I agree with this, thinking it would work effectively to hide the bug.
My digipak received positive comments about the images used – particularly the background images. Although I did have one comment that the artist looked superimpose and too in focus compared to the background this was intentional and I personally like the effect it gives along with most people who gave feedback. I was also praised for the original way that the song titles are laid out on the back panel of my digipak: non-conventionally and creatively. As the font looked slightly like handwriting I purposely did not lay the song titles out conventionally so that it gave the audience the impression that the artist had written them herself and so therefore they felt they could relate to her and were closer with her than just a consumer. However, with the image of the artist on the back I had several comments that it needed re-proportioning in order for it to look less flat and more realistic. Furthermore, I had one comment that you could not see the rest of her body, including her feet which made the image look slightly un-naturalistic. I agree with this but personally found it very difficult to take a picture of the artist which incorporated her feet yet did not make it look like she had ears.
Finally, my video received a fairly positive response overall, especially about the lip syncing, storyline matching the lyrics and the screwed up paper stop motion sequences.
When shooting the video I had my actress to actually sing to the song to make the lip syncing easier and more convincing. When storyboarding my ideas, after receiving my audience questionnaire results which made it clear that the audience wanted a mix of performance and storyline in a video, I tried to plan a storyline closely related to the visuals. This meant audience understanding was easy, there were no questions to answer it was all told in the lyrics what was happening. Also, the situation the lyrics describe I felt is one a lot of young, teenage girls would be able to relate to and so therefore in making my video based around that situation they would be able to relate to the video and again feel closer to the artist because they are led to believe that the artist has been in that situation as well and can empathize with them.
The main criticism I received was that the ending shots lacked quality and were too dark. I agree with this and although the tapes provided by college made all shots slightly grainy, when I had to lighten the shots artificially when editing this did not aid the quality. It was due to bad planning that the end sequence could not be re-filmed and was I to do the project again realistic planning of time would be my main priority as when I set out to do start this project I did not comprehend just how long it would take to get the right shots I needed.
The course specified that we had to have permission to use the track we wanted to use in our music video and that the music track could not already have a music video for it. Without the internet and e-mail this would have been a lengthy process of writing to bands/artists individually and asking for permission with many hours spent writing letters and waiting for replies. However, with use of the internet research into the artist, whether they are signed and who you have to ask for permission is relatively easy and can take minutes if you know how to use a search engine. An e-mail can then be sent and is received by the recipient’s inbox instantly. Therefore, the process of finding a track and gaining permission to use it.
When analysing music videos modern technology, again, made it far easier to carry out this task. Before YouTube and other such video sharing sites were around on the internet music videos had to be watched on television. Therefore, when trying to analyse a particular video this task would have been made much more lengthy and harder to choose which video to analyse. When using YouTube there is choice of which music video you want to watch and analyse, the opportunity to pause it and re-watch it as many times as you wish. If watched on the television, short of sitting watching music channels all day you would be stuck analysing whichever music videos came on first and the only way to view them again would be to tape them.
For the planning of my project new media technologies did not benefit me so much in the construction as most was either drawn by hand or just typed text (therefore it could have been handwritten). However, using Blogger to present my planning allowed me to incorporate many images and my audio file which would not have been possible easily if present my work in a paper folder. Presenting it on Blogger also meant any changes could be dealt with quickly and easily rather then re-writing whole pages of handwritten text or re-taking photographs and waiting for them to develop.
When filming for the construction of my video I used a Sony Mini DV camera. By using a mini dv camera I made the process easier for myself because you can just plug the camera straight into the computer via a firewire cable and capture rather than having to use the tape in a special capturing machine. Using a digital camera also allowed me to use the digital screen attached to the camera to frame my subjects better and obtain better quality shots.
Once uploaded to the computer, editing consisted of using one program: Adobe Premiere Pro CS4. This program let me add audio, cut audio from the original shots, add special effects and titles if I so wished. Before modern editing suites were available the special effects would have either had to be added by hand or using separate programs which is both time consuming and difficult. Modern technology eased my editing process and allowed me to come out with a much more professional looking product without needing as much experience.
When finished my video had to be exported in order to allow me to upload it to YouTube and onto DVD. Whereas before YouTube and DVDs I would have had to have sent a tape to the moderator or had them come in internally to view my product these new digital methods of sharing media allow me to do it cheaply and easily.
When websites were first introduced there were all written in HTML by experienced web designers. They were difficult to create without thorough background knowledge of HTML and did not work particularly well. With the introduction of CSS and JavaScript many websites became more interactive, easier to use and generally just worked better. Although, without the prior knowledge of the coding involved were still pretty hard to make for yourself. Modern programs such as Adobe Dreamweaver CS4 allow you to create a website in a “what you see is what you get” style. In recent years these programs have become very popular with those who do not have extensive knowledge of coding, or perhaps none at all. Although I have limited knowledge of HTML and CSS, Adobe Dreamweaver CS4 allowed me to create a website much more simply and quicker. I was able to see what the website would look like without previewing it constantly and the program automatically wrote the code for me when I inserted an image, text or changed the background colour for example. The whole website was written for me when I visually created it and so therefore this program was a great help in creating me website.
My digipak again was massively aided by the advance in technology. I used Corel Paint Shop Pro 9 to manipulate my images and Adobe Fireworks CS4 to construct the main panels. Once obtained the sizes of the digipak I set about creating the panels in Adobe Fireworks CS4. When planning I had stated that I wanted images of my artist over a natural background of grass, I decided this would be easiest done by taking pictures of her against a green screen and then super-imposing her onto another image using Corel Paint Shop Pro 9. Again, whereas before image manipulation was difficult and a lengthy process image manipulation software now allows you to do super impose one image on top of another effectively and relatively easily. After taking my images with a digital SLR camera I uploaded them to the computer. Corel Paint Shop Pro 9 allowed me to use a tool to find the edges of my artist and cut her out easily from the background.
I then loaded some pictures of grass I had taken, also digitally, earlier, and simply pasted her on top. When creating my panels, due to my past experience with the program, Adobe Fireworks CS4 meant that I could add many special effects (such as shadows and bevels) quickly and effectively. Being able to save and edit multiple versions easily in order to compare them was also a great advantage when using modern technology whereas before they would have been drawn by hand and it would have taken a long time to get multiple copies.
Initially my evaluation was written in Microsoft Word which allowed for easy transfer between computers via e-mail and memory stick and also allowed spelling and grammar mistakes to be found and corrected easily and quickly. Compared with writing out the bulk of the text by hand, checking spelling in a dictionary and having to re-write it every time you re-drafted which is a lengthy process. When transferred over to my blog, to back up my points and to further explain my points to the moderator Blogger allowed me to insert media to my evaluation which, if handing the evaluation on paper in a folder, would not have been possible.
Below is my draft edit for my music video. It's no where near the quality and consistancy I except from my finished draft and has a long sequence of leaves which I only put in to fill the gap where that sequence has not yet been filmed due to filming being delayed.
The feedback I receieved from my draft edit is as follows:
Hannah E
Shots of girl on bench tend to last too long and are too much in mid shot – more CU needed and cuts need to be much more frequent
Green screen shots are weak
Leaves shots need to be removed!
Final shots with boy are too dark – are they supposed to be in a relationship, or have they just met? – not clear. If in a relationship then need to be sitting closer and have more eye contact, if not, then what is happening???
Phone at start says Mine 5 minutes, so why does she go and sit on a bench?
CU cuts top of her head off – better framing needed
Try to get her to sing to camera rather than to the side
38 secs What’s on your mind is wobbly
1:24 camera bag in shot
Lots of lip synch out
Why I chose my track
I chose to use the track London Town by Jodie Jones because the song seemed very open ended. The lyrics were closed, yes, but the actual music itself could either lead to a happy or sad video. This meant lots of creative possibilities.
Also, the song was sung by a female artist meaning it would be easier for me to gain performance points as I would not have to find a male willing to be filmed and mime (I have plenty more female friends willing to be filmed than male).
Location Choices
For my filming I have chosen to main locations: a public park near me and Andrea's bedroom. Both are close by to my house and college and so therefore allow for easy access for filming/re-filming. The public park also has several different "settings" I can use making it a natural choice to allow variety of shots in my music video.
Risk Assessment
Performer choices
The person I chose to be the main female protagonist is Andrea Grimley -
- Andrea is a good friend and so therefore I know she will work hard and agree to dress/wear what is necessary
- She is conventionally "girly" and so therefore fits how I picture the main protagonist to look
- She is slim and will wear makeup to enhance her image - therefore in the video this will sell her image to the consumer rather than the music
Costume
Due to the nature of the track I feel dressing my protagonist provactiely, as is conventional for popular music videos invovling female artists, is innopropraite. Instead my main protagonist will adopt the "girl next door" look with plain white tee, blue jeans and Converse All Star shoes. This look, although dressed down, still allows the audience to relate to her therefore still selling her image to the consumer.
Webpage Mockup
CD Cover/Inlay mockup
Above is my storyboard for my music video accompanied by the track I am using. The storyboard does not run in time with the track however.
Treatment
After listening to the music track several times I have planned out a storyboard and come up with a final idea for my music video. The video will centre around the narrative of the lyrics and will therefore involve and boy and a girl falling for each other.
The video will open on the girl fixing her makeup in a mirror before receiving a text message asking her to be somewhere in 5 minutes. The name of the sender and the reason for meeting will be left ambigious in order to indulge the consumer and in order to enable the narrative to work effectively. The girl will then be seen leaving her house and walking down the street whilst miming - therefore incorporating the performance factor into the video. She will be seen to arrive at another house but it is not shown who opens the door.
The video will then cut to the girl with a friend looking at a guys Facebook profile. Who the guy is will be left ambigious but it should be pretty clear from the end of this sequence that the main protagonist is interested in this person and from the lyrics of the song that she has fallen for him. I then plan to incorpoarte some stop motion animation involving a piece of paper unfolding from being screwed up to reveal a love heart with a question mark. This piece of paper unfolding will become the main way for the audience to figure out the main protagonists emotions during the video.
The main protagonist will then be seen sitting under a tree with her friends - potentially talking about the guy. Her phone will be shown with a picture of the guy on it and her friends will show their dissaproval and at obsessed she is with him - again portraying her emotions for him to the audience. This will be followed by her writing notes, getting distracted and drawing a love heart which she then procedes to screw up and throw in the bin. Again, with the stop motion portraying her emotions the screwed up paper unfolds to reveal the heart she drew break.
The girl is seen to go and sit on a bench and mimes again to the camera as the guy comes and sits next to her. He begins to flirt with her and they end up leaving together - portraying the story the lyrics imply. The stop motion finalizes off the video with the screwed up paper now showing the audience just a whole heart - the couple have ended up together.
- I have chosen to use a track by an unsigned artist called Jodie Jones
- Jodie is 19 years old and is from Devon, UK.
- Jodie began songwriting at school and released her home recorded debut album in 2005
- Jodie lists "Suzanne Vega, Bruce Hornsby, Vanessa Carlton, Avril Lavigne, Counting Crows" as her influences on her Myspace Music page
- Her lyrics are upfront and confrontational
- As of yet Jodie Jones is an unsigned artist. However, if she were to be signed to a record label it would most probably be to a major record label such as Sony Music Entertainment or EMI
- She would more than likely be signed by a major record label because her music would largely be classified in the pop genre which appeals to the masses and potentially would bring in a lot of profit for the labels
- Major record labels have certain genres they would not sign e.g. alternative rock because they do not fit in the image of popular, widespread music that the company has created for itself
On January 23rd 2009 Lily Allen released the first single of her second album entitled "It's Not Me, It's You.". The single was entitled "The Fear" and the promotional video for it was directed by Nez (The Streets, Kano). The single is classifed in the Pop genre by both iTunes music store and Amazon Digital Downloads.
The song opens with the line: "I wanna be rich and I want lots of money." As Lily Allen mimes this line she is shown in a long shot which shows the viewer that she is in caravan. Therefore, in this instance the visuals amplify the lyrics as typically someone living in a caravan dreams of having more money. Life living in a caravan is not potrayed as being partically luxurious because her washing is hung crudely on a line to the left of her and her furniture and curtains appear dated and old because of their floral pattern.
Just before the chorus Lily turns around, re-enters her caravan and is suddenly transferred to what appears to be a room in a large house. She is shown mostly in high angle shots throughout the chorus as she sings "I don't know what's right and what's real anymore." Therefore, the use of high angle shots to show her amplifies the lyrics in portraying her to be a victim, scared and confused. However, as it is a music video and is therefore designed to promote the artist as well as the song, Lily is also shown through mid shots throughout the chorus so that her beauty and image can be sold as well.
In the first verse after the chorus Lily sings: "Life's about film stars and less about mothers." at which the point the visuals straight cut to a close up on old childrens toys. They look untouched hence again amplifying the lyrics of the song that life is less about mothers now - toys and childhood, the needing of mothers, has been left behind.
Lily sings: "I am a weapon of massive consumption" as she is shown in a long shot skipping into a room full of wrapped items. The visuals again here amplify the lyrics as Lily sings about being a mass consumer she is surrounded by lots of items: therefore portraying that she buys a lot of things and is a mass consumer.
Again, for the chorus Lily is shown mostly in high angle shots portraying she is little and confused. Therefore, the lyrics she sings: "I don't know what's right or what's real anymore." "When will it all become clear?" are amplified through the use of this visual.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hbm4G_7rGzQ
The second music video I chose to analyse had the embedding of the video disabled by request and so therefore a link to the video is provided above.
On the 15th November 2004 Avril Lavigne released her third single from her second album entitled "Under My Skin". The single was called "Nobody's Home" and is classified in the pop genre by both iTunes and Amazon Digital Downloads.
The video opens with a blurred close up of a girl gazing, looking lost, into the sunset. The fact that the shot is blurred connotes her state of mind: confused and hazed. The fact that this shot is a close up means no information is given about the girl, who she is and why/where she is. This intrigues the viewer and makes them want to watch on.